Alright
Just work on making the animation smoother, mainly by using more frames when they move and fight. You had some original things like the battery which made him come back to life and some of the kills were also quite neat - those parts were good. It had some good solid fight scenes and a good length so creds for that.
Ok I try
Gripping
The artwork really brings this animation to life and the animation fits perfectly with it. I especially loved the ending as he was pulled into the darkness - it was kind of hard to tell exactly what was happening - the crows took him? Regardless that was quite dark which make it all the more a great Halloween submission.
You guessed correctly sir, the crows took him, I know it's kind of hard to understand, maybe if we get time we'll put on the ending we originally intended.
Anyway thanks, for the constructive review, glad you liked it.
Shocking
That was actually quite frightening - really well put together; good animation, great sounds effects and suspense.
Glad I could scare!
I'm better at Madness now. Expect something soon.
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